I am saddened or disappointed in the lack of response to my haiku challenge. I am going to explain one of mine and then withdraw. It is the one that I was told I could not have written!
That would be number 2:
Rainbows on hill tops,
Puffins reigning supreme.
Glad am I for this.
It refers to a memory of an event 60 years ago when Vicki taught me how to play the Eriskay Love Lilt on the piano, all on the black keys since it is in the pentatonic scale.
The last line of the haiku paraphrases a line in the song:
How could this sentiment be AI?
The challenge then is to find the others I wrote and the 2 AI wrote:
The poems have been odered alphabetically by 1st line.
#1
Coastal windswept home,
Pink spheres on slender stems sway,
Salt air, sun-drenched life.
#2
Rainbows on hill tops,
Puffins reigning supreme.
Glad am I for this.
#3
Sea Pinks along the cliffs
Nesting with Puffins, Fulmars,
Nature Lovers smile.
#4
Sea pinks on the rock,
Fair Isle coast in salty wind,
Pink cushions hold fast.
#5
Sea pinks shimmering -
Dewy droplets lovers shed.
Fragile strength embrace.
WOB

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